forgetfulness

2011-03-10 · 첨삭 강사 lei

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I am a person who is forgetful. when I meet people,I didn't reconize them. Even if I already met them. It was a big problems. When I realized my problems, I thought that It's time to decide to change habits.I read los of books to change my habits. I found that. I started writing about what do I do, what is priority like that. That method is really good. But lots of people are the same as me. I know, they also think like me.one thing I couldn't fix it that is another forgetfulness. When I encounter something that I don't like, I didn't remember all of thing, Actually I don't need to memorize that. One of my friends told me, you need to memorize that things. It need to you. She asked "What is your priority?" I think you memorize what ever you like or want.I confirm you will regret that.

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Hi [이름]!!! Kindly check below the corrections that I have for your composition. See you tomorrow!!! Lei I am a person who is forgetful. >>I am a forgetful person. when I meet people,I didn't reconize them. >>I don't recognize the people whom I met. Even if I already met them. >>correct It was a big problems. >>it was a big problem. When I realized my problems, I thought that It's time to decide to change habits. >>correct I read los of books to change my habits. >>I read a lot of books to change this habit. I found that. >>correct I started writing about what do I do, what is priority like that. >>I started to take note of my priorities. That method is really good. >>correct But lots of people are the same as me. >>correct I know, they also think like me. >>correct one thing I couldn't fix it that is another forgetfulness. >>One thing I couldn't fix is my forgetfulness. When I encounter something that I don't like >>correct Actually I don't need to memorize that. >>correct One of my friends told me, you need to memorize that things. >>One of my friends told me to memorize those things. It need to you. >>I need you to. She asked "What is your priority?" >>correct I think you memorize what ever you like or want. >>I think you only memorize what you like or want. I confirm you will regret that. >>correct

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