forgetfulness
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I am a person who is forgetful. when I meet people,I didn't reconize them. Even if I already met them. It was a big problems. When I realized my problems, I thought that It's time to decide to change habits.I read los of books to change my habits. I found that. I started writing about what do I do, what is priority like that. That method is really good. But lots of people are the same as me. I know, they also think like me.one thing I couldn't fix it that is another forgetfulness. When I encounter something that I don't like, I didn't remember all of thing, Actually I don't need to memorize that. One of my friends told me, you need to memorize that things. It need to you. She asked "What is your priority?" I think you memorize what ever you like or want.I confirm you will regret that.
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I am a person who is forgetful.
>>I am a forgetful person.
when I meet people,I didn't reconize them.
>>I don't recognize the people whom I met.
Even if I already met them.
>>correct
It was a big problems.
>>it was a big problem.
When I realized my problems, I thought that It's time to decide to change habits.
>>correct
I read los of books to change my habits.
>>I read a lot of books to change this habit.
I found that.
>>correct
I started writing about what do I do, what is priority like that.
>>I started to take note of my priorities.
That method is really good.
>>correct
But lots of people are the same as me.
>>correct
I know, they also think like me.
>>correct
one thing I couldn't fix it that is another forgetfulness.
>>One thing I couldn't fix is my forgetfulness.
When I encounter something that I don't like
>>correct
Actually I don't need to memorize that.
>>correct
One of my friends told me, you need to memorize that things.
>>One of my friends told me to memorize those things.
It need to you.
>>I need you to.
She asked "What is your priority?"
>>correct
I think you memorize what ever you like or want.
>>I think you only memorize what you like or want.
I confirm you will regret that.
>>correct
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