Forgive
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Once someone said \"When you forgive, you cannot change the past, but you sure do change the future.\" What does it mean to you?
I think forgiving sets me free. There are many things I could never understand in the world. It gets me mad at times, and I can\'t be happy carrying those negative feelings. In that case, I try to understand the situation and accept it. In addition, forgiveness gives the other person second chance to regret their mistakes and build up better relationships. This process(?) gets our growth.(?)
(Thank you for your feedback)
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Good evening, Yu [이름]!
Your Answer: I think forgiving sets me free. There are many things I could never understand in the world. It gets me mad at times, and I can\'t be happy carrying those negative feelings. In that case, I try to understand the situation and accept it. In addition, forgiveness gives the other person second chance to regret their mistakes and build up better relationships. This process(?) gets our growth.(?)
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Question: Once someone said \"When you forgive, you cannot change the past, but you sure do change the future.\" What does it mean to you?
Your Answer: I think forgiving sets me free. There are many things I could never understand in the world. It gets me mad at times, and I can\'t be happy carrying those negative feelings. In that case, I try to understand the situation and accept it. In addition, forgiveness gives the other person second chance to regret their mistakes and build up better relationships. This process(?) gets our growth.(?)
>> I think forgiving sets me free. There are many things I could never understand in the world. It makes me mad at times, and I can\'t be happy if I keep on carrying those negative feelings with me. In that case, I try to understand the situation and accept it. In addition, forgiveness gives the other person a second chance to feel regrets over their mistakes and build up better relationships. This process can help us with our growth.
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Absolutely agree with you! :)
Forgiving others can free up the space in our hearts and minds so that we can store happier memories. :D
See you later in class!
~Miya^^
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