Form affirmative statements using the given words/phrases.

2013-03-13 · 첨삭 강사 Kristel

학생이 쓴 원문

1) on the bench sit they There are a pretty girl and a shy boy sitting on the bench. When he saw her at the first time in the class, he felt a flying butterfly in his stomach. Today, he decide to say how love her. 2) walk we in the forest often I live in a small town which is located in front of the Chunggye mountain. My parents love to hiking and want to let me join together. We often walk in the forest. 3) are playing the boys hockey The boys are playing hocky. 4) after Frank and Robert school meet To excereise, Frank and Robert meet after school almost every day. 5) from Scotland she is She is the one who is from Scotland. As well known, Scotland What is your weekness? I think I am chatty. It is usually in order to make soften the atmosphere but I realize it is not good for everyone. So, I would act depands on the person who talk with me.

강사 첨삭

Hello there!! A pleasant afternoon! Thank you very much for doing your homework! You did great in constructing your sentences. However, you were supposed to just arranged the words I have provided to form an affirmative sentence. :) Anyway, next time, please try to follow instructions. Thanks! ^^ Have a nice day and see you in class! T.Sheela 1) on the bench sit they There are a pretty girl and a shy boy sitting on the bench. When he saw her at the first time in the class, he felt a flying butterfly in his stomach. Today, he decide to say how love her. >> There is a pretty girl and a shy boy sitting on the bench. When he saw her for the first time in the class, he felt a flying butterfly in his stomach. Today, he decided to tell her how much he loves her. 2) walk we in the forest often I live in a small town which is located in front of the Chunggye mountain. My parents love to hiking and want to let me join together. We often walk in the forest. >> I live in a small town which is located in front of the Chunggye mountain. My parents love to hike and want me join them. We often walk in the forest. 3) are playing the boys hockey The boys are playing hocky. >> CORRECT!!4) after Frank and Robert school meet To excereise, Frank and Robert meet after school almost every day. >> CORRECT!! (but check the spelling of exercise)5) from Scotland she isShe is the one who is from Scotland. As well known, Scotland >> She is the one who is from the well-known, Scotland.What is your weekness? (check the spelling; weakness)I think I am chatty. It is usually in order to make soften the atmosphere but I realize it is not good for everyone. >>CORRECT!! It is usually because I want to make a good atmosphere but I realized that it is not good for everyone. So, I would act depands on the person who talk with me. >>So, I should act it depends on the person talking with me. >>So, I should act depending on the person talking with me.

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