Fortnight
학생이 쓴 원문
Fortnight is a game.It`s like Battle ground,but it`s little different.My friends play fortnight too.We play together at every saturday evening.
They are so~~~good at fortnight especially my1st best friend.There are 3 1st best friends his one of them,and his good at spicy things.
So my friends play tham in the PC and nintendo.I use nintendo one of my best friend use PC.I played them today.I wish this week`s
saterday is coming very fast!
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름] Ju! ^^
Thank you so much for doing your homework.
Enjoy your night! :)
~ T. Tricia
Fortnight is a game.
>> Fortnight is a computer game.
It`s like Battle ground,but it`s little different.
>> It\'s like Battleground, but it\'s a little different.
My friends play fortnight too.
>> CORRECT!
We play together at every saturday evening.
>> We play together every Saturday evening.
They are so~~~good at fortnight especially my1st best friend.
>> They are so good at playing fortnight especially my first best friend.
There are 3 1st best friends his one of them,and his good at spicy things.
>> I have three best friends, he is one of them and he likes spicy food.
So my friends play tham in the PC and Nintendo.
>> So my friends and I play Fortnight on PC. and Nintendo.
I use nintendo one of my best friend use PC.
>> I use Nintendo and one of my best friends uses a PC.
I played them today.
>> I played with them today.
I wish this week`s saterday is coming very fast!
>> I wish this week\'s Saturday will come very fast!
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