fortnite season 6
학생이 쓴 원문
Now fortnite is season 6.It calls primeval ages. It has great story,and theres new weapon bow. I think I`m good at bow. So When I down loaded I was 1st. Because I have epic level bow.And map is changed. So I explored,It`s very good,fun.I wish saterday is come fast,so
I can play fortnite with my friends.
강사 첨삭
Hello, [이름] Ju ^^
Thank you so much for doing your homework.
See you on Friday! :)
~ Teacher Tricia
Now fortnite is season 6.
>> Fortnite is on season 6 now.
It calls primeval ages.
>> This season\'s theme is primeval age.
It has great story,and theres new weapon bow.
>> It has a great story, and there\'s a new weapon bow.
I think I`m good at bow.
>> I think I\'m good at using a bow.
So When I down loaded I was 1st.
>> So, I was the first to download it.
Because I have epic level bow.
>> Because I have an epic level bow.
And map is changed.
>> The map changed too.
So I explored,It`s very good,fun.
>> I explored and it was very good and fun.
I wish saterday is come fast,
>> I wish Saturday will come fast.
so,I can play fortnite with my friends.
>> So, I could play Fortnite with my friends.
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