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2011-09-26 · 첨삭 강사 Faye

학생이 쓴 원문

Fortunately, today path through without problem. Two plans were completely finished. I submit a homework, advertising in the paper for Nikon camera before 12 pm. I entered the one print advertisement and the other TV-CM for global warming publish campaign advertisement on 6 pm. My teacher said it's great. He will teach the detail good points ,bad points and how to better on nexttime.

강사 첨삭

Hello Susan! I am glad that you were able to accomplish something over the weekend. See you in class! T.Faye Here are your corrections: Fortunately, today path through without problem.>>Fortunately, my path went through without a problem.Two plans were completely finished.>>Correct!I submit a homework, advertising in the paper for Nikon camera before 12 pm.>>I submitted my homework about advertising in the paper for a Nikon camera before 12 PM.I entered the one print advertisement and the other TV-CM for global warming publish campaign advertisement on 6 pm.>>I entered one print advertisement and a TV-CM for the global warming publish campaign advertisement at 6 PM.My teacher said it's great.>>Correct!He will teach the detail good points ,bad points and how to better on nexttime. >>He will tell me the details about the good and bad points and how I can do better next time.

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