Fortune-teller, is it real?
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I have no idea about the fortune-teller because I have never met fortune-teller person-to-person.
>>I have no idea about the fortune-teller because I have never met a fortune-teller in person.
One thing that I tried was to buy a fortune cookie and open it.
>>One thing I\'ve tried was to buy a fortune cookie and opened it.
It said, \'You need to be more courageous rather than too careful when you are hesitating to do something.\'
>>correct
It is a kind of maxim or good phrase, which becomes a common saying nowadays.
>>It is a kind of maxim or a good phrase, which is becoming a saying nowadays.
Is it really tell me a fortune?
>>Does it really tell about my fortune?
That plausible message just points out all of us, people who are nervous to do something difficult for them.
>>That plausible message just points out to all of us that people who are nervous to do something difficult.
The general saying may impress a man who bought the cookie or visited the teller, however, I think such things can happen luckily and unexpectedly.
>>correct
In my opinion, fortune-teller uses a similar method.
>>correct
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