Fortuneally, Korea has no volcano, earthquake.
학생이 쓴 원문
There is the earthquake, volcano in Philippines, Japan.
Philippines, Japan belong to the circum-Pacific Ocean orogenic area.
Fortuneally, Korea has no volcano, earthquake.
Sometimes small earthquake occurs in Korea.
That do not cause disaster.
The height of Baekdu Mountain is 2,944 meter.
It is similar to Mt. Apo.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]!
Wow, I’m impressed!!
You really researched on the height of Mt. Apo.
Yeah, I also researched on the height and I found out that Baekdu and Mt. Apo has the similar elevation..
Good job!!
T. Shy
There is the earthquake, volcano in Philippines, Japan.>> There are earthquakes and volcanoes in the Philippines and Japan.
Philippines, Japan belong to the circum-Pacific Ocean orogenic area.>> Philippines and Japan belong to the circum-Pacific Ocean organic area.
Fortuneally, Korea has no volcano, earthquake.>> Fortunately, Korea has no volcano or earthquake.
That do not cause disaster.>> That does not cause disaster.
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