Forwad,forward, forward

Hi [이름]! Thanks for sending your composition. Is this your own composition?

I have corrected your sentences. I hope it will help. See you! ^^

~~May~~

New year start again.

>> The new year has started.

Or >> It\'s another new year.

last year passed in front of us.

>> Another year has passed.

But, Some People missed their past for a long time and regretted not having done something that they could have done.

>> But some people missed some things and regretted not having done anything that they were supposed to have done.

As far as we know , it \' s a matter of thinking. life is present for us. 

>> As far as we know, it\'s a matter of how the way we think. This is life.
 In other words, we can\'t only alter our past, but also we can\'t anticipate our future correctly.

>> We can\'t only alter our past, but we can\'t also anticipate our future.

Our time is just right now. so we should accept reality as it is.

>> This is our time so we should accept what reality is.

Besides we don\'t have to worry about the uncertain futures of our lives during their supreme moments.

>> We don\'t have to worry about the uncertainty of our future.

Although we can not divert the stream of our past and we don\'t know what our future is, we have a strong key for our lives. 

>> Although we can\'t change the past anymore and we don\'t know what the future holds, we still have a motivation to strive harder.
In conclusion,If we go forward, we can change and face up our bight future.

>> In conclusion, if we go forward, we can change and face the bright future.

we must adapt to what the situation is today.

>> We must adapt today\'s situation.

Then we have to be prepared for the reality of our obvious time.

>> Then, we have to be prepared for everything in time.

we have to try to do our best for our flexible future.

>> We have to try to do our best in the future.

Forward, forward, forward for our dream. Never give up~!!

>> Reach our dreams! Never give up!