foundation of marriage
학생이 쓴 원문
Marriage is not everything that looks like it.
Even though, they loved each other at first sight, and they loved each other passionately
The first feeling I felt is gone in only three years.
So what do we need to get the foundation to collapse?
It`s hard to conclude with just one thing.
In my case, trust in each other is the most important.
Marriage is a reality, we can`t just live with love.
Financial problems, child-rearing, and not being able to live comfortably alone........
Beyond the feelings of love, the other person`s sincere and warm heart.
These things are more important
To all young men and women.
When they are in trouble, they want to be the only one who`s on their side and who wates for them.
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The only person who be on their side when they tired and tird
강사 첨삭
Good day Mrs. [Name]! Thank you for doing your homework. You did a wonderful job. Keep it up as always. See you in class! Have a great day!
Here are your corrections:
Here are your corrections:
>> Marriage is not everything that it looks like.
>> Even though they love each other on sight and looks like a passionate love... (there should be continuing phrase)
>> The first feeling I felt is gone only after three years of marriage.
So what do we need to get the foundation to collapse?
>> So, what does it take to let the foundation not to collapse?
>> So, what does it take to let the foundation not to collapse?
It`s hard to conclude with just one thing.
In my case, trust in each other is the most important.
Marriage is a reality, we can`t just live with love.
Financial problems, child-rearing, and not being able to live comfortably alone........
Beyond the feelings of love, the other person`s sincere and warm heart. These things are more important To all young men and women.
>> CORRECT
>> CORRECT
>> Marriage in reality is hard, we can\'t just live with love.
>> Also, financial problems, child-rearing, and not being able to live alone comfortable.
>> Aside from love, sincere and warm heart are also important.
>> When they are in trouble, they want their partner to be on their side and waits for them.
>> And they\'re the only one on their side when they\'re tired.
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