four (4) adjectives to describe my life

2017-09-25 · 첨삭 강사 Amanda

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1.Tired. I`m working 5 days a week. so I tired. But Mon, Wed, Fri are not much tired. Because I have a lesson with T.amanda. 2.Happy I`m happy Mon, Wed, Fri. I`m pretty sure. You know why I`m happy those days. 3.Bored I`m bored Tue. Thu, Sat, Sun. Because I don`t have lesson those days. 4.calm I`m calm when I eat banana. The color of banana makes me calm. And the taste of banana plesuer me too.

강사 첨삭


Good afternoon Lion! How are you doing?

Thank you for answering your homework. Your answers are a bit unexpected but humorous. They made me smile. Haha!

Please check the corrections I made for future reference. Thank you.

See you tonight!

Amanda :)



1.Tired. 
 I`m working 5 days a week. so I tired. But Mon, Wed, Fri are not much tired. Because I have a lesson with T.amanda.
>>  I\'m working five days a week, so I\'m tired. But I find Monday, Wednesday and Friday to be less exhausting because I have a lesson with T. Amanda.  


 2. Happy
I`m happy Mon, Wed, Fri. I`m pretty sure. You know why I`m happy those days.
>> I\'m happy every Monday, Wednesday and Friday. I\'m pretty sure you know the reason why I\'m happy during those days.


 3.Bored

>> Bore or bored is a verb, the adjective form is boring. 
 I`m bored Tue. Thu, Sat, Sun. Because I don`t have lesson those days.
>> I\'m bored during Tuesdays, Thursdays, Saturdays and Sundays because I don\'t have lessons on those days.


 4. calm
I`m calm when I eat banana. The color of banana makes me calm. And the taste of banana plesuer me too.

>> I\'m calm when I eat a banana. The color of banana makes me calm  and it\'s taste pleasures me.  

>> OR: Whenever I eat a banana, I feel calm. It\'s color relaxes me and it\'s taste brings me pleasure.

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