Four seasons
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
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In the Philippines, there are only two seasons: wet and dry or summer and rainy.
You are really lucky that your country has four seasons.
Honestly, I\'ve never seen a snow. ^^
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There are lots of people like four seasons.
>> Correct
Four seasons have their attractions
>> Correct
or >> Four seasons have their own attractions.
Spring is a beautiful time when the flowers bloom everywhere so it\'s wonderful season to spend time outside.
>> Spring is a beautiful time for the flowers to bloom everywhere so it\'s a wonderful season to spend time outside.
In summer, people can go to the beach and swim. and they like to eat watermelon and ice cream.
>> Correct
In fall, fruits are plentiful and delicious.
>> Correct
Or >> In fall, there are many delicious fruits.
I like eat fresh persimmons.
>> I like eating fresh persimmons.
The mountains are beautiful in the fall.
>> The mountains are beautiful in fall season.
Many mountains are covered with colorful autumn foliage.
>> Correct
In Winter, Snow turn the world into white land in front of us.
>> In winter, the areas are surrounded by snow.
We can feel pure and we can see the children have a snowball fight and make snowman outside.
>> We feel happy and we can see children making a snowman and playing with snowballs outside.
But some people compared with each season.
>> But there are some people who compare the seasons.
Besides, some people doesn\'t like specific season like summer, winter because, it\'s so hot and it\'s so cold.
>> Besides, some people doesn\'t like a specific season.
We should know and appreciate that not all countries have four seasons.
>> We should know that not all countries have four seasons.
we are blessed with four entirely dissimilar seasons and we can enjoy four seasons anytime~.
>> We are blessed that we experience four different seasons and we enjoy them anytime.
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