four words

2012-01-20 · 첨삭 강사 Faye

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1. toil Advertising job looks like wonderful job. But actually this job is toil than office job. 2. content I content the result because I did best. 3. drew I drew my mother face to her heart's content. 4. picture I like chagall's pictures are colorful and hopeful.

강사 첨삭

Hello Susan, Great job making your homework. Please be aware of the corrections I gave you and notice the sentence construction so that next time it would be better. Do not forget your prepositions or other words to complete the sentences. But overall, great job.I am hoping that you would be doing your homework everyday. See you on Wednesday! T.Faye Here are your corrections: 1.toilAdvertising job looks like wonderful job. But actually this job is toil than office job.>>The advertising job looks like a wonderful job, but this job has it's toil. 2. contentI content the result because I did best.>>I was contented with the result because I know I did my best. 3. drewI drew my mother face to her heart\'s content.>>I drew my mother's face to my heart's content. 4. pictureI like chagall\'s pictures are colorful and hopeful. >>I like Chagall's pictures. They are colorful and hopeful.

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