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Hi there [이름]!(\",)
I can tell you really know the difference between being intelligent and being clever. My next question would be then, do you think you are intelligent or are you clever?
~T. Lynn
Lynn Teacher!
>> Teacher Lynn,
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>> First of all, thank you for recommending YouTube to me.
Thanks to it, I will be able to study speaking in English much better and more fun from now on.
>> Thanks to it, I will be able to study English speaking much better and more fun from now on.
There are two differences between being intelligent and being clever.
>> correct!
First, To be intelligent, people just learns overall knowledge.
>> First, to be intelligent, people just learn general knowledge.
But, It is almost impossible to be clever by trying because cleaver is sense and it isn\'t acquired easily.
>> But, It is almost impossible to be clever by trying because being clever is sense and it isn\'t acquired easily.
Second, To be intelligent, We have to improve an ability solving some difficult problems.
>> Second, to be intelligent, we have to improve our ability in solving some difficult problems.
By solving them, We can improve our intelligence ability.
>> By solving them, we can improve our intelligence.
On the other hand, To be clever, We must be wise but being wise isn\'t easy too.
>> On the other hand, to be clever, we must be wise but being wise isn\'t easy too.
If we try to do, Nothing is impossible but it will take a lot of times and efforts to gain wisdom.
>> If we try to do it, nothing is impossible but it will take a lot of time and effort to gain wisdom.
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