France

2021-10-20 · 첨삭 강사 Sharon

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Many people love France because there are many beautiful places like Eiffel tower, Seine river and Champs-Elysees. When I saw Eiffel tower on a boat at Seine river after the sunset, I absolutely fell into it. But I was upset when they just spoke french even though they were able to speak and understand English. I could’t understand what they were trying to say. But I totally agree that France has it’s own mood that any other European countries don’t have.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]ny!
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~~ Teacher Sharon
Many people love France because there are many beautiful places like Eiffel tower, Seine river and Champs-Elysees.
>> Many people love France because there are many beautiful places like the Eiffel Tower, Seine river and Champs-Elysees.
When I saw Eiffel tower on a boat at Seine river after the sunset, I absolutely fell into it.
>> When I saw the Eiffel Tower on a boat at Seine river after the sunset, I absolutely fell in love with it.
But I was upset when they just spoke french even though they were able to speak and understand English.
>> However, I was upset when they just spoke French even though they were able to speak and understand English.
I could’t understand what they were trying to say.
>> I couldn\'t understand what they were trying to say.
But I totally agree that France has it’s own mood that any other European countries don’t have.
>> However, I totally agree that France has its own mood that any other European countries don’t have.

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