Frediric chopin^0^

Today in English class,I learned about Fredric chopin. First,I saw his name. But,I couldn't remember who was him. Then,teacher told everyone who was him. I remembered then. He was a pianist!! But I didn't know about him very well, beacause in piano academy,I didn't listen carefully about him. Because I was very bored of that time~^3^. So this time, I had to listen carefully what teacher is saying. 1.He was born in Poland. 2.When he was 20 years old,he moved to France and there he became famous 3.His music is still loved very much. When I heard that,I thought he was very good,and he never gave up that time.^*^ and I will do well than Chopin. by,([이름]) ^0^

Hello [이름]! Happy Monday to you!^-^ Thank you for sending in your composition! I really appreciate your diligence. Take care and I'll see you! _Melissa_ Today in English class,I learned about Fredric chopin. >>Today in English class, I learned about Fredric Chopin.First,I saw his name. But,I couldn't remember who was him. >>First, I saw his name but I couldn't remember who he was.Then,teacher told everyone who was him. >>Then my teacher told everyone about him. I remembered then. >>I remembered him since then.He was a pianist!! >>Correct!^^ But I didn't know about him very well, beacause in piano academy,I didn't listen carefully about him. Because I was very bored of that time~^3^. >>I didn't know about him very well, because in the piano academy, I didn't listen carefully about him since I was very bored at that time.^3^So this time, I had to listen carefully what teacher is saying. >>So this time, I had to listen carefully about what the teacher is saying. 1.He was born in Poland.>>Correct!^^2.When he was 20 years old,he moved to France and there he became famous >>Correct!^^ >>Don't forget your spacing and punctuation mark though: When he was 20 years old, he moved to France and there he became famous.3.His music is still loved very much.>>Correct!^^When I heard that,I thought he was very good,and he never gave up that time.^*^>>When I heard that, I thought he was very good and he never gave up that time. ^*^and I will do well than Chopin. >>I will do better than Chopin.by,([이름]) ^0^ >>By: [이름] ^0^ >>By [이름] ^0^