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학생이 쓴 원문
It is very difficult for me when i need to teach attitutude and value to other people.
I empahasize my students that free is not really free.
I talt to them even you get it for free but that is your parents and my taxes.
I have to feel grateful others.
강사 첨삭
Good day, Ms. [이름]!
Teaching children to value things must start at home. Sadly, most children nowadays easily get what they want that is why they do not understand how to value other things.
thank you for sharing your thought as always. Talk to you in class.
Aki~
It is very difficult for me when i need to teach attitutude and value to other people.
>>> It is very difficult for me when I need to teach attitude and values to other people.
I empahasize my students that free is not really free.
>>> I emphasize to my students that free is not really free.
I talt to them even you get it for free but that is your parents and my taxes.
>>> I talk to them even if you get it for free but that is your parents and my taxes.
I have to feel grateful others.
>>> I have to feel grateful to others.
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