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강사 첨삭
Good afternoon Miss. [Name]!
Thank you for sending this in.
I hope that you are having a good day.
Anyway, take care!
<<ESSAY >>
If you were an employer, which kind of worker would you prefer to hire: an inexperienced worker at a lower salary or an experienced worker at a higher salary? Use specific reasons and details to support your answer.
: As I know, most of employers like to hire inexperienced worker at a lower salary.
>> As I know, most employers like to hire inexperienced workers at a lower salary.
>> As I know, most employers like to hire an inexperienced worker at a lower salary.
Because, Most of company have ability of making get better their career, through their own business management educations.
>> Because most companies can provide trainings and seminars to enhance the skills of their employees.
Think creatively.
>> Correct
>> or: Be creative.
That is the best.
>> That is the best qualification of a good employee.
<< Free Composition>>
1. Contents of this text book are very old and stupid.
>> 1. The contents of this text book are very old and stupid.
All of articles are wrong.
>> All the articles are wrong.
>> All the data from the articles are wrong.
Because, In my eyes, these things are written by foreign reporters who are not well known about reality of Korea.
>> Because I think these things were written by foreign reporters who are not familiar about life in Korea.
So, I can\'t get these opinions.
>> So I don\'t understand their opinions.
2. I saw the The Philippines movie \'Assassination of Benigno Aquino\' last Saturday.
>> I saw the Filipino movie, \'Assassination of Benigno Aquino\' last Saturday.
I \'m ordinarily into history and politic of other countries.
>> I\'m interested about history and politics of other countries.
In fact, this is very famous story in the world.
>> In fact, this is a very famous story all over the world.
It\'s a shame, dictatorship of President Marcos caused economic failure.
>> It\'s a shame that the dictatorship of President Marcos caused economic failure.
By the way.. How could Imelda be a congresswomen?
>> By the way, how did Imelda become a Congresswoman?
I was quite surprised.
>> Correct.
That was a mysterious event.
>> That was suspicious.
>> That was a surprising event.
However, on the other hand, I envied her beauty and authority. --::::
>> Correct.
3. I don\'t live fear of my future after retirement.
>> I am not afraid of my future after retirement.
Meaning of words \'fear\' and \'afraid\' aren\'t the same.
>> The meaning of fear is different from afraid.
They are different specifically.
>> Correct.
I\'m afraid I \'m getting older and weak.
>> I\'m afraid I\'m getting older and weaker.
4. It\'s a shame I couldn\'t get married earlier.
>> Correct.
I always regret I got married too late.
>> Correct.
Possibly, it will be my life-long regret.
>> Correct.
5. It would be grateful to God, if I were genius.
>> Correct.
It would be fantastic, if you went to Niagara Falls.
>> It would be fantastic if you could go to Niagara Falls.
It would be helpful, I could speak Chinese well.
>> It would be helpful, if I could speak Chinese well.
It would be unforgettable, I went to Rocky Mountain National Park of Canada.
>> It would be unforgettable/fun if I could go to the Rocky Mountain National Park of Canada.
It would be excited, they could try some Korean food at Samcheong-dong.
>> It would be exciting if they would try some Korean foods at Samcheong-dong.
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