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1. The doctor clearly suggested to me that I should quit drinking, from now on.
My mother used to suggest to me that I should get married earlier.
I want to suggest to my husband that you should take a rest.
My husband used to suggest to me that I should start to take a golf lesson.
I want to suggest to my father that you should stop to eat raw fish.
Did you suggest to me that I should go to The Philippines?
Does he suggest to you that you should practice the piano?
I don't want to suggest to you that you should do that, quickly.
I didn't suggest to her that she should go to the party.
2. I have stopped eating raw fish.
She hasn't been ill, until now.
We have known each other since fall in 2011.
They have been fighting in other to cooking since last Monday.
I have never forgotten him sine I first met him.
I have just finished drinking a fresh brewed coffee.
I have finished brewing coffee, already.
Haven't you stopped smoking, yet?
Has he been working at the office, yet?
Have they met at the lounge, yet?
I have lost my swimsuits.
We have loved each other since we got married.
I have been happy since I learned English.
I have just spilt the salt.
I have been fishing at Han River in Seoul for 1year.
3. I wish I could be as intelligent as him
I wish I could fly to the Moon.
I wish I should sleep from now on.
I wish I could run as fast as Usain St. Leo Bolt.
I wish I could try some fantastic foods.
Some day, I wish I could get dressed up like a fashion model.
I wish I might tell you.
I wish I might be with you.
I wish winter should end soon.
I wish the rainy season shouldn't end soon.
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You must have spent a lot of time doing this *_*
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1. The doctor clearly suggested to me that I should quit drinking, from now on.
>>CORRECT! My mother used to suggest to me that I should get married earlier.>>CORRECT! I want to suggest to my husband that you should take a rest. >>I want to suggest to my husband that he should take a rest.
My husband used to suggest to me that I should start to take a golf lesson.
>>My husband used to suggest to me that I should starting to take a golf lesson. I want to suggest to my father that you should stop to eat raw fish.
>>I want to suggest to my father that he should stop eating raw fish. Did you suggest to me that I should go to The Philippines?
>>Did you suggest to me that I should go to the Philippines? Does he suggest to you that you should practice the piano?
>>CORRECT!I don\'t want to suggest to you that you should do that, quickly. >>CORRECT!
I didn\'t suggest to her that she should go to the party.
>>CORRECT!
2. I have stopped eating raw fish. >>CORRECT!
She hasn\'t been ill, until now. >>CORRECT!
We have known each other since fall in 2011. >>CORRECT!
They have been fighting in other to cooking since last Monday. >>They have been fighting about who will cook since Monday.
I have never forgotten him sine I first met him.
>>I have never forgotten him since we first met.I have just finished drinking a fresh brewed coffee.
>>CORRECT!I have finished brewing coffee, already. >>CORRECT!
Haven\'t you stopped smoking, yet? >>CORRECT!
Has he been working at the office, yet? >>CORRECT!
Have they met at the lounge, yet? >>CORRECT!
I have lost my swimsuits. >>CORRECT!
We have loved each other since we got married. >>CORRECT!
I have been happy since I learned English. >>CORRECT!
I have just spilt the salt. >>CORRECT!
I have been fishing at Han River in Seoul for 1year. >>CORRECT!
3. I wish I could be as intelligent as him >>I wish I could be as intelligent as him.
I wish I could fly to the Moon.
>>I wish I could fly to the moon. I wish I should sleep from now on.
>>CORRECT!I wish I could run as fast as Usain St. Leo Bolt.
>>CORRECT! I wish I could try some fantastic foods.
>>CORRECT! Some day, I wish I could get dressed up like a fashion model.
>>Someday, I wish I could get dressed up like a fashion model. I wish I might tell you.
>>CORRECT! I wish I might be with you.
>>CORRECT! I wish winter should end soon.
>>CORRECT! I wish the rainy season shouldn\'t end soon.
>>CORRECT!
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