free of press
학생이 쓴 원문
It seems the process of developing democracy in India.
We can\'t say that Indis is a democracy society even there exisy a caste system.
Press is a symbol of democracy. Every dictator always try to control press with political purpose.
강사 첨삭
Ms. [이름]!
The caste system seems unfair to me. It impedes individual and economic growth available for everyone.
Thank you for this.
Aki~
It seems the process of developing democracy in India.
>>> CORRECT!
We can\'t say that Indis is a democracy society even there exisy a caste system.
>>> We can\'t say that India is a democratic society even if there exists a caste system.
Press is a symbol of democracy. Every dictator always try to control press with political purpose.
>>> The press is a symbol of democracy. Every dictator always tries to control the press for political purposes.
파워잉글리쉬 영어첨삭교정 서비스에 실제로 접수된 글입니다. 작성자와 글에 등장하는 사람·회사 이름, 연락처 등 개인을 알아볼 수 있는 정보는 모두 지웠습니다. 문법 오류는 학습 자료로서의 가치를 위해 원문 그대로 두었습니다.