free size
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Originally , the meaning of free size is flexible and quite a large size.
But I have experienced that some clothes are very tight and small even though by buying free size clothes.
I think also this is a shallow commercial trick of fashion business.
It makes women obsessed with overweight.
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Ms. [이름]!
I like the way you express your thought about \"free size\" and I totally agree that it is a commercial trick for women. Though there is an advantage, they should still be avoiding tricking people.
Aki~
Originally, the meaning of free size is flexible and quite a large size.
>>> CORRECT!
or >> Originally, \"free size\" was meant to indicate a flexible and relatively larger fit.
But I have experienced that some clothes are very tight and small even though by buying free size clothes.
>>> But I have experienced that some clothes are very tight and small, even though I bought free size clothes.
>>> However, I\'ve personally found that some \"free size\" clothes can be very tight and small.
I think also this is a shallow commercial trick of fashion business.
>>> I think also this is a shallow commercial trick of the fashion business
It makes women obsessed with overweight.
>>> It contributes to making women feel insecure about their weight.
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