free talking

2020-08-05 · 첨삭 강사 Beth

학생이 쓴 원문

It is raining for days. How about there ? . It was much raining yesterday. some house was destroyed. and landslide happend hear and there. Korea weather changed . when i was a child . if it was rainning. it was continuing for days. but nowaday it is rainning for hours and it is stop suddenly and it is rainning for hours. It is like the Philipplines. I have a question. I think free talking is better for study english. and I like free talking . but I am hard. I was made sentence with english before starting class. When I have difficulty making sentences. I use the Google Translator to create English sentences. What do you think about Google Translator ? I didn\'t understand exactly your talking. I understand that your talking is sometimes is fine but is bad. Do you think that I exactly understand ? I want to know that free talking is good for me.

강사 첨삭

Hello Sir John. I think Google Translator is not a 100% accurate so do not rely too much on it. Free talking is fine if you feel more comfortable doing it. However, I guess we would need to talk about simpler topics.

- T. Beth
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It is raining for days.

>>> OR: It has been raining for days.

How about there ?

>>> correct
It was much raining yesterday.

>>> It was raining a lot yesterday.

some house was destroyed. and landslide happend hear and there.

>>> Some houses were destroyed and landslides happened here and there.

Korea weather changed .

>>> Korean weather has changed.

when i was a child . if it was rainning. it was continuing for days.

>>> When I was a child, if it was raining, it continued for days.

but nowaday it is rainning for hours and it is stop suddenly and it is rainning for hours.

>>> But nowadays, when it rains, it pours for few hours then it suddenly stops then rain again.

It is like the Philipplines.
>>> It is like in the Philippines.
I have a question.

>>> correct
I think free talking is better for study english. and I like free talking .

>>> I think free talking is better for studying English, and I like free talking.

but I am hard.

>>> But I am having a hard time.
I was made sentence with english before starting class.

>>> I made sentences using English before starting the class.
When I have difficulty making sentences. I use the Google Translator to create English sentences.

>>> When I have difficulty making sentences, I use the Google Translator to create English sentences.

What do you think about Google Translator ?
>>> correct
I didn\'t understand exactly your talking.

>>> i didn\'t understand exactly what you said.
I understand that your talking is sometimes is fine but is bad.

>>> I understand that you said it was fine but it is not a good idea.

Do you think that I exactly understand ?

>>> Did I understand it exactly?
I want to know that free talking is good for me.

>>> I want to know if free talking is good for me.

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