Free talking today.
학생이 쓴 원문
Dear [Name]
I think I am driving when you call me for the lesson.
So, I want to talk about Chosuk in Korea or long holiday.
If you want to talk about your country holiday I\'m OK
Flankly, I don\'t know the custom of your country.
See you soon^^
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]~ Thank you for your composition. I appreciate it very much. I would love to talk about them in our class. See you later! ^^
Here are your corrections:
I think I am driving when you call me for the lesson.
>> I think I am driving when you will call me for our lesson later.
>> So, I want to talk about Chu Seok holiday of Korea or any long holidays.
>> If you want, we can talk about your country\'s holiday. I\'m okay with that.
>> Frankly, I don\'t know any custom in your country.
>> CORRECT
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