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How to play LOL
League of legends is a game type of Multiplayer Online Battle Arena(MOBA), and it is serviced by the company Riot Games.
This is also called \'LOL\' for short. (not laugh out loud or lots of love *^ㅡ^*)
To play LOL, first you choose the position.
When the game start, two teams will fight, one team consisting of 5 players.
Each player of one team selects one of the five position.
There are 5 positions; top liner, mid liner, jungler, bottom liner and supporter.
Top, mid and bottom liner are fight with opponent liner at top, middle and bottom of battlefield as the word itself.
In the battlefield, there are jungle fields between each lines, and many objects are here.
Jungler gets around here and obtains objects to get gold and exp.
The other important assignment of jungler is \'ganking\'.
Excess of the number of letters, I\'ll write again on another day.
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Hi. ^^
League of legends is a game type of Multiplayer Online Battle Arena(MOBA), and it is serviced by the company Riot Games.
>> League of Legends is is a Multiplayer Online Battle Arena (MOBA) game type, and it is serviced by the company of Riot Games.
This is also called \'LOL\' for short. (not laugh out loud or lots of love *^ㅡ^*)
>> CORRECT!
To play LOL, first you choose the position.
When the game start, two teams will fight, one team consisting of 5 players.
>>
Each player of one team selects one of the five position.
>> CORRECT!
There are 5 positions; top liner, mid liner, jungler, bottom liner and supporter.
>> CORRECT!
Top, mid and bottom liner are fight with opponent liner at top, middle and bottom of battlefield as the word itself.
>> Top, mid and bottom liner fight with opponents from the liner at top, middle and bottom of the battlefield as the word itself.
In the battlefield, there are jungle fields between each lines, and many objects are here.
>> CORRECT!
Jungler gets around here and obtains objects to get gold and exp.
>> The Jungler goes around the field and obtains objects to get gold and exp points.
The other important assignment of jungler is \'ganking\'.
>> The other important assignment of a jungler is \'ganking\'.
Thank you for sharing this with me!
My friends play LOL, and it is quite a fascinating game.
I appreciate your effort in explaining the game to me. ^^
~T. Ally
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How to play LOL
>> CORRECT!
>> CORRECT!
League of legends is a game type of Multiplayer Online Battle Arena(MOBA), and it is serviced by the company Riot Games.
>> League of Legends is is a Multiplayer Online Battle Arena (MOBA) game type, and it is serviced by the company of Riot Games.
This is also called \'LOL\' for short. (not laugh out loud or lots of love *^ㅡ^*)
>> CORRECT!
To play LOL, first you choose the position.
When the game start, two teams will fight, one team consisting of 5 players.
>>
Each player of one team selects one of the five position.
>> CORRECT!
There are 5 positions; top liner, mid liner, jungler, bottom liner and supporter.
>> CORRECT!
Top, mid and bottom liner are fight with opponent liner at top, middle and bottom of battlefield as the word itself.
>> Top, mid and bottom liner fight with opponents from the liner at top, middle and bottom of the battlefield as the word itself.
In the battlefield, there are jungle fields between each lines, and many objects are here.
>> CORRECT!
Jungler gets around here and obtains objects to get gold and exp.
>> The Jungler goes around the field and obtains objects to get gold and exp points.
The other important assignment of jungler is \'ganking\'.
>> The other important assignment of a jungler is \'ganking\'.
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