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2024-01-12 · 첨삭 강사 Jenna

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1. It was snowy really. >> It was really snowy. 2. I know a really interesting fact about snow. correct, or >> I know an intriguing fact about snow. 3. It\'s coming towards like this. >> It\'s coming downwards like this. 5. I do a pictionary. Correct, or >> Let\'s play a pictionary 6. 3rd grade >>I had my first caricature drawing when I was in 3rd grade. 7. I\'ll show you what it draw. >> I\'ll show you how I drew it. 8. Do you have a problem with human drawings? >> Do you have difficulty drawing humans?

강사 첨삭

Hi Heather! It\'s always great to see you actively participating in class. I was even happier to learn you took the time to read and work on the sentences I shared with you. We all make mistakes when speaking, especially unconsciously. But your willingness to learn and improve is what truly impresses me. Remember, mastering flawless speech takes time and practice. Keep referring to your evaluation box for reminders, and focus on consistently applying those improvements. You\'ll be amazed at how quickly your confidence and accuracy grow!

~T. Jenna

1. It was snowy really.
>> It was really snowy.
2. I know a really interesting fact about snow.
correct, or
>> I know an intriguing fact about snow.
3. It\'s coming towards like this.
>> It\'s coming downwards like this.
5. I do a pictionary.
Correct, or
>> Let\'s play a pictionary
6. 3rd grade
>>I had my first caricature drawing when I was in 3rd grade.
7. I\'ll show you what it draw.
>> I\'ll show you how I drew it.
8. Do you have a problem with human drawings?
>> Do you have difficulty drawing humans?

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