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Topic: How do you study well? Most koreans think that doing well korean, english and math is studying well. If you do well the major subjects, you would be likely to enter to major universities in Seoul. However, I think entering to the universities doesn't necessarily depend on doing study well. For example, Assume you get great grades in the tests of the major subjects. you used to prepare the skills only for the tests rather than acquire diverse knowledges. Is getting great grade in the test studying well? No, I think studying is learning something and After learning it, you should make more creative and extensive knowledge by building on it. Therefore, doing well the major subjects is not necessarily related to doing study well. Only doing well the major subjects makes us less creative. That decreases our thinking ability.

Hi [이름]! This is a remarkable composition! Well done! You might have committed a few grammar mistakes here and there, but you were able to express your ideas well. I totally agree with what you wrote here.   Keep up the good work! Ciao! ~Teacher Marie~  Most koreans think that doing well korean, english and math is studying well. >> Most Koreans think that doing well in Korean, English and Math is doing well in your studies. If you do well the major subjects, you would be likely to enter to major universities in Seoul. >> If you do well in the major subjects, you could enter the top universities in Seoul. However, I think entering to the universities doesn\'t necessarily depend on doing study well. >> However, I think entering a top university doesn\'t necessarily depend on studying well. For example, Assume you get great grades in the tests of the major subjects. >> For example, assume you get good grades in your major subjects. you used to prepare the skills only for the tests rather than acquire diverse knowledges. >> You used your time to prepare for the tests rather than to acquire diverse knowledge. Is getting great grade in the test studying well? >> Does getting good grades in the test mean you do well in your studies? No, I think studying is learning something and After learning it, you should make more creative and extensive knowledge by building on it. >> No. I think studying is learning something and then making something creative and extending your knowledge from that. Therefore, doing well the major subjects is not necessarily related to doing study well. >> Therefore, doing well in the major subjects is not necessarily related to doing well in your studies. Only doing well the major subjects makes us less creative. >> Only doing well in the major subjects makes us less creative. That decreases our thinking ability. >> CORRECT!