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2016-01-28 · 첨삭 강사 Marie

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Topic: Do you know short story, 'the open boat'? 'The open boat' is published by stephen crane in 1898. Content of the book is how did 4 crews survive in the open boat. Particularly, the author in the book emphasizes that although they were approached by various natural disasters and they were in very dangerous circumstance, nature was indifferent to them. And the author also shows that even though the humans were struggling to overcome natural disasters, they ended up the failure. In short of, I think the author would like to show us that nature cannot help but be stronger than human. In other words, even if humans develop a lot of somethings, they can't surpass nature's power.

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Hello [이름]! This is a very interesting book. I think I need to read it too. Thank you for sharing about this. Check my corrections below. Ciao! ~Teacher Marie~ \'The open boat\' is published by stephen crane in 1898. >> The \"Open Boat\" was published by Stephen Crane in 1898. Content of the book is how did 4 crews survive in the open boat. >> The book contained the story of how the 4 crews survived in the open boat. Particularly, the author in the book emphasizes that although they were approached by various natural disasters and they were in very dangerous circumstance, nature was indifferent to them. >> Particularly, the author of the book emphasized that, although they were approached by various natural disasters and they were in very dangerous circumstances, nature was indifferent to them. And the author also shows that even though the humans were struggling to overcome natural disasters, they ended up the failure. >> Moreover, the author showed that even though the humans were struggling to overcome the natural disasters, they ended up failing. In short of, I think the author would like to show us that nature cannot help but be stronger than human. >> In short, I think the author wanted to show us that nature is stronger than humans. In other words, even if humans develop a lot of somethings, they can\'t surpass nature\'s power. >> In other words, even if humans develop a lot of advanced and innovative things, they cannot surpass nature\'s power.    

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