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Topic: What do you think about raising gas tax in USA? The plunge of gas price makes people save their money, because they reduce gas fee for their cars. However, that is not good for everyone in USA. Most people engaging in transportation works may get a loss. Why does the situation happen? The less gas price is, the more driving people is. Then, people drive their cars rather than use transportations. Therefore, demands of the transportations will be getting low, then development of them will be bad. The existing passengers in them may be uncomfortable for them. How do we solve the problem? I think that raising gas tax is great solution. If the governments in USA raise gas tax and the revenue is used to develop transportations, people less frequently drive than before and passengers in them is more and more. Finally, balance between driving people and passengers in the transportations is fit as the same weighting two people sit in seesaw.

Hello [이름]! These are very good insights. Thanks for sharing your thoughts about this topic. Great job! Please check my corrections below. Ciao! ~Teacher Marie~ The plunge of gas price makes people save their money, because they reduce gas fee for their cars. >> The plunging gas price can help people save their money because they won\'t spend too much on car gas. However, that is not good for everyone in USA. >> However, that is not good for everyone in the U.S.A. Most people engaging in transportation works may get a loss. >> People who are in the transportation business might suffer a loss. Why does the situation happen? >> Why does this situation happen? The less gas price is, the more driving people is. >> The lower the gas price is, the more people will drive. Then, people drive their cars rather than use transportations. >> Then people would drive their cars rather than use public transportation. Therefore, demands of the transportations will be getting low, then development of them will be bad. >> Therefore, the demand of transportation will get lower and they won\'t get any development. The existing passengers in them may be uncomfortable for them. >> The passengers might get uncomfortable. How do we solve the problem? >> CORRECT! I think that raising gas tax is great solution. >> I think raising the gas tax is a great solution. If the governments in USA raise gas tax and the revenue is used to develop transportations, people less frequently drive than before and passengers in them is more and more. >> If the government in the U.S.A. raise the gas tax and the revenue is used to develop transportation, people would drive less frequently than before and the public transportation passengers would increase. Finally, balance between driving people and passengers in the transportations is fit as the same weighting two people sit in seesaw. >> Finally, there would be balance between drivers and commuters, just like two people sitting on a seesaw.