Fresh fruit
학생이 쓴 원문
I like fruit in season. Not a single day do I skip eating fruit. During winter season I can eat apples and tangerines . And thanks to the green house farming we can have all the kinds of fruit. Nowadays I enjoy sweet persimmons almost every day. Spring is around the corner. Soon I can enjoy plenty of strawberries and blueberries.
강사 첨삭
Hello, Gi [이름]!
I suddenly want to eat fresh fruits after reading your homework. Haha! :D
Thank you for completing your homework. You did an excellent job!
Anyways, see you tomorrow!
-T.Jhozel
I like fruit in season. Not a single day do I skip eating fruit.
>> Fruit in season is my favorite. I never skip eating fruit.
During winter season I can eat apples and tangerines .
>> Correct!
OR: During the winter, I can eat apples and tangerines.
OR: During the winter, I can eat apples and tangerines.
And thanks to the green house farming we can have all the kinds of fruit.
>> Correct!
OR: And, thanks to greenhouse farming, we can have a variety of fruits.
OR: And, thanks to greenhouse farming, we can have a variety of fruits.
Nowadays I enjoy sweet persimmons almost every day.
>> Correct!
Spring is around the corner.
>> Correct!
Soon I can enjoy plenty of strawberries and blueberries.
>> Correct!
OR: I\'ll be able to eat a lot of strawberries and blueberries soon.
OR: I\'ll be able to eat a lot of strawberries and blueberries soon.
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