Freshman life
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I'm a freshman of university. Everyone said, "You are happy because you're a freshman, aren't you?" But I am not. First, I did not want to go to this college. However I have no choice because I got a low grade at KSAT. Second, math class which I have not studied before is too difficult to me. Moreover there are a lot of homework to finish in 3days. Third, I have a cold. So I don't want to move to anywhere. I just want to sleep. I'm very tired. Although I am freshman, I am not happy as everyone said. So I'm prepare the exam which can go to another college. But it is too hard to study the subjects. And I can not handle the time as I want to do. How can I do?
강사 첨삭
Hello So Hee,
Wow! It's your first day and already you are being active in class. Good job. Keep it up! I don't really know what to do with your problem but my advice is try to make a schedule for the lessons you need to study. Make a time table so that you will have more focus and your thoughts would not be scattered. If you have any questions I would be glad to help you with it. See you tomorrow!
Teacher Faye
Here are your corrections:
I\'m a freshman of university.
>>I'm a freshman in the University.
Everyone said, \"You are happy because you\'re a freshman, aren\'t you?\" But I am not.
>>Correct!
First, I did not want to go to this college.
>>Correct!
However I have no choice because I got a low grade at KSAT.
>>However, I did not have a choice because I got a low score on my KSAT.
Second, math class which I have not studied before is too difficult to me.
>>Second, the math subject that I have not studied before is too difficult for me.
Moreover there are a lot of homework to finish in 3days.
>>Moreover, I have a lot of homework to finish in just 3 days.
Third, I have a cold. So I don\'t want to move to anywhere.
>>Third, I have a cold so I don't want to go anywhere.
I just want to sleep.
>>Correct!
I\'m very tired.
>>Correct!
Although I am freshman, I am not happy as everyone said.
>>I am a freshman but I am not happy like everyone is saying.
So I\'m prepare the exam which can go to another college.
>>So I'm preparing for an entrance exam in another college.
But it is too hard to study the subjects.
>>But I am having a hard time studying the subjects.
And I can not handle the time as I want to do.
>>And I cannot handle them at one time.
How can I do?
>>What can I do?
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