Friday
학생이 쓴 원문
Today is friday. I love friday.Because after diner we watch TV. And most of friday my mother sleep with me.It` 2st day in the week.1st is
saterday,because that day there`s no study.So we play saterday many times.And My friends and I play fortnite at saterday too.So We watch TV program call Youn stey,My golden baby.Youn stey is koriea`s famous acters run hotel and My golden baby is how to take care
of your children.So I love friday
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름] Ju! ^^
Thank you so much for doing your homework.
Enjoy your weekend! :)
~ T. Tricia
Today is friday. I love friday.
>> Today is Friday and I love Friday.
Because after diner we watch TV.
>> Because after having dinner we can watch TV.
And most of friday my mother sleep with me.
>> And most of the day my mother sleeps beside me.
It` 2st day in the week.
>> It\'s the second day of the weekend.
1st is saterday,because that day there`s no study.
>> The first day is Saturday and on that day I don\'t need to study.
So we play saterday many times.
>> So we play on Saturday for a lot of
And My friends and I play fortnite at saterday too.
>> My friends and I play Fortnite every Saturday too.
So We watch TV program call Youn stey, My golden baby.
>> So we watch a TV program called \"Youn Stay\". and \"My Golden Baby\".
Youn stey is koriea`s famous acters run hotel and My golden baby is how to take care of your children.
>> Youn Stay is a famous Korean actor who runs a hotel and My Golden Baby is a show on how to take care of children.
So I love friday.
>> So I love Friday.
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