friday
학생이 쓴 원문
my friday is so simple. first I go to school and lead peaceful class. and I go to academy. I solve a math problem. it\'s done.
강사 첨삭
Hey there, Samuel. You can write basic sentences correctly and are learning to connect ideas. Watch your spelling and remember to use capital letters and periods appropriately. Keep a short daily journal in English. It’s a simple but powerful way to improve. I hope you\'re having a good evening. See you in class. ~Teacher Jane c\",
my friday is so simple.
>> My Friday is so simple.
first I go to school and lead peaceful class.
>> First, I go to school and have peaceful classes.
and I go to academy. I solve a math problem. it\'s done.
>> Then I go to the academy, solve math problems, and it\'s done.
파워잉글리쉬 영어첨삭교정 서비스에 실제로 접수된 글입니다. 작성자와 글에 등장하는 사람·회사 이름, 연락처 등 개인을 알아볼 수 있는 정보는 모두 지웠습니다. 문법 오류는 학습 자료로서의 가치를 위해 원문 그대로 두었습니다.