Friday, April 13th. Homework for Teacher Shelly.
학생이 쓴 원문
Subject: All about my cat. (using the worls 'Lost','Express', and 'Favorite'.
In 2010, when I was a university student, one of my friend told me that she had found a cat which was lost from the mountain which is quite far from her home.
She expressed her feeling about sorry for the cat because the cat was pregnant ahd there was no food for the cat in the mountain. So she decided to bring the cat.
Amazingly,the cat gave birth five kittens and my friend was looking for places for the kittens. Yes, my cat is one of them.
I chose her because she was not a sort of pretty and cute cat that people want to have, I felt pity for her.
Even though she used to make a big trouble, scratch my thing and sometimes hurt my mom and my dog, now she's my favorite.
She always welcomes me home and makes me laugh.
Thanks to her, I could learn more about cats.(including big cat like tigers and lions)
Cats are one of the most fascinating animals in the world!
강사 첨삭
Good day, Olivia!
Thank you for answering your homework and sharing with me the story on how you got your cat.
It is an interesting and it shows that you are an affectionate and a good person.
Have a blessed day! Below are some of your corrections.
-Teacher Shelly-
>>>Subject: All about my cat. (using the words \"Lost\" , \"Express\" and \"Favorite\"
In 2010, when I was a university student, one of my friend told me that she had found a cat which was lost from the mountain which is quite far from her home.
>>>In 2010, when I was a university student, a friend of mine told me that she found a lost cat.
>>>She found the cat from a mountain that is quite far from her house.
She expressed her feeling about sorry for the cat because the cat was pregnant ahd there was no food for the cat in the mountain. So she decided to bring the cat.
She expressed her feeling about sorry for the cat because the cat was pregnant ahd there was no food for the cat in the mountain. So she decided to bring the cat.
>>> She felt sorry for the cat. She expressed sadness when she found out that the cat was pregnant and doesn\'t have food to eat in the mountain.
Amazingly,the cat gave birth five kittens and my friend was looking for places for the kittens. Yes, my cat is one of them.
>>>Amazingly, the cat gave birth to five kittens. My friend was looking for someone who will adopt the kittens. Yes, my cat was one of them
I chose her because she was not a sort of pretty and cute cat that people want to have, I felt pity for her.
I chose her because she was not a sort of pretty and cute cat that people want to have, I felt pity for her.
>>>I chose her because she isn\'t somewhat a pretty and cute cat, that people would want. I pity her.
Even though she used to make a big trouble, scratch my thing and sometimes hurt my mom and my dog, now she\'s my favorite.
She always welcomes me home and makes me laugh.
She always welcomes me home and makes me laugh.
>>>She used to scratch my things and sometimes hurt my mom and my dog.She is now my favorite.
Thanks to her, I could learn more about cats.(including big cat like tigers and lions)
Cats are one of the most fascinating animals in the world!
Cats are one of the most fascinating animals in the world!
>>> Correct!
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