Friday homeowrk

Hello [이름]!

Thank you for doing your homework. :)

I understand that English could be really difficult.

But it only takes faith and confidence in yourself to perfect it.

You are a smart person and I know that with constant practice you will do great… ^_^

Xoxo,

T. Christina ^^

Here are my corrections for you:

Face-to-face communication don\'t need to wait for few second for the answer, but communication using computers need to wait for few second to listen other persons\' answer.

>> In a face-to-face communication, you don\'t need to wait for a few seconds for the answer, but with communication using computers, you need to wait for a few seconds to listen to another person\'s answer.
Also, if the weather is not good, and a person that I\'m talking to is at very far a way from me, then there will be a lot of racks.

>> Also, if the weather is not good and a person that I\'m talking to is in a very far away place from me, then there will be a lot of interruptions.
Lastly, if it\'s communication using, computers, then people need to pay some money because, people use electricity when they communicate with computers.

>> Lastly, people need to pay in communicating through computers because people use electricity and internet when they use computers.