Friday homeowrk
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름]!
Thank you for doing your homework. :)
I understand that English could be really difficult.
But it only takes faith and confidence in yourself to perfect it.
You are a smart person and I know that with constant practice you will do great… ^_^
Xoxo,
T. Christina ^^
Here are my corrections for you:
My favorite event of my childhood is my birthday party.
>> CORRECT!
I like them because, I received my birthday present and I ate cake, and I feel very good when it\'s my birthday.
>> I like that event because I received my birthday present and I ate cake, and I also feel very good when it\'s my birthday.
Also, my birthday party is my best event in these days too.
>> In addition to that, my birthday party is the best event in these days too.
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