Friday homeowrk
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름]!
Thank you for doing your homework. :)
I understand that English could be really difficult.
But it only takes faith and confidence in yourself to perfect it.
You are a smart person and I know that with constant practice you will do great… ^_^
Xoxo,
T. Christina ^^
Here are my corrections for you:
Usually I don\'t visit museums when I go to another city.
>> Usually, I don\'t visit museums when I go to another city.
Sometimes I go to another city for traveling, but most of the time, I visit another city to visit my relatives.
>> Sometimes I go to another city for travel, but most of the time, I visit another city to visit my relatives.
And actually, I don\'t visit museums if I didn\'t go to another city for more than one day.
>> Actually, I don\'t visit museums if I\'m not going to stay in another city for more than one day.
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