Friday homeowrk

Hello [이름]!

Thank you for doing your homework. :)

I understand that English could be really difficult.

But it only takes faith and confidence in yourself to perfect it.

You are a smart person and I know that with constant practice you will do great… ^_^

Xoxo,

T. Christina ^^

Here are my corrections for you:

I\'m not that sure, but I think it\'s usually eighteen to twenty age.

>> I\'m not that sure, but I think it\'s usually at the age of eighteen to twenty.
I\'m not sure that part time job is work, but if it is, then it\'s usually eighteen to twenty.

>> I\'m not sure if a part time job is work, but if it is, then it\'s usually eighteen to twenty.
I think most of people do pert time job when they are eighteen or twenty, because they need money to live.

>> I think most people have a part time job when they are eighteen or twenty years old because they need money to live.