Friday homeowrk

Hello [이름]!

Thank you for doing your homework. :)

I understand that English could be really difficult.

But it only takes faith and confidence in yourself to perfect it.

You are a smart person and I know that with constant practice you will do great… ^_^

Xoxo,

T. Christina ^^

Here are my corrections for you:

I don\'t know who\'s annoying now, but if I have a younger brother or sister, then I think they would be annoying.

>> CORRECT!
If I have a younger brother or sister, and if they don\'t have any academy, they will be bored so they will tell me to play with them.

>> If I have a younger brother or sister and they don\'t have any academies, they will be bored so they will ask me to play with them.
But I have some homework, and I need to do that, 

>> But then, I have some homework and I need to do that.

but if my younger brother or sister tells me to play with them, then it would be annoying.

>> If my younger brother or sister tells me to play with them, then that would be annoying.