Friday homeowrk

Hello [이름]!

Thank you for doing your homework. :)

I understand that English could be really difficult.

But it only takes faith and confidence in yourself to perfect it.

You are a smart person and I know that with constant practice you will do great… ^_^

Xoxo,

T. Christina ^^

Here are my corrections for you:

I\'m not that accurate but I think when I was 4~6 years old.

>> I\'m not sure but I think when I was 4 to 6 years old.
I lived in the Philippines when I was 4~6 years old and when I was living in there, I go on a holiday to Manila.

>> I lived in the Philippines when I was 4 to 6 years old and when I was living there, I went on a holiday to Manila.
Also, I went a lot of vacation spot, or somewhere that I can feel joyful, so it\'s not that accurate but I\'m sure that I went on a holiday when I was 4~6 years old.

>> Also, I went in a lot of vacation spots or somewhere that I felt joyful.

so it\'s not that accurate but I\'m sure that I went on a holiday when I was 4~6 years old.

>> It\'s not that accurate but I\'m sure that I went on a holiday when I was 4 to 6 years old.