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2021-12-03 · 첨삭 강사 Christina

학생이 쓴 원문

Q:What will the future be like for you? A:I think my future will be like I live well, and I research some creatures and I earn money well. Actually, that\'s what I want to be like in the future, so I will try my best to be like what I said. Also, I want to manage me well, so I can be healthy in the future, too.

강사 첨삭

Hello [이름]!

Thank you for doing your homework. :)

I understand that English could be really difficult.

But it only takes faith and confidence in yourself to perfect it.

You are a smart person and I know that with constant practice you will do great… ^_^

Xoxo,

T. Christina ^^

Here are my corrections for you:


I think my future will be like I live well, and I research some creatures and I earn money well.

>> I think my future will be like I will live well, I will research about some creatures, and I will earn money well.
Actually, that\'s what I want to be like in the future, so I will try my best to be like what I said.

>> CORRECT!
Also, I want to manage me well, so I can be healthy in the future, too.

>> Also, I want to manage myself well so I can be healthy in the future.

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