Friday homeowrk
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름]!
Thank you for doing your homework. :)
I understand that English could be really difficult.
But it only takes faith and confidence in yourself to perfect it.
You are a smart person and I know that with constant practice you will do great… ^_^
Xoxo,
T. Christina ^^
Here are my corrections for you:
Yes, we keep plants inside our house if it\'s winter.
>> Yes, we keep plants inside our house when it\'s winter.
We don\'t keep plants inside our house if it\'s not winter, but we keep them inside our house when it\'s winter because it\'s cold outside.
>> CORRECT!
We don\'t keep them inside our house if it\'s not winter because they can photosynthesis outside if it\'s not winter.
>> We don\'t keep them inside our house if it\'s not winter because they can process photosynthesis outside.
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