Friday homeowrk
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Q:What are some expectations parents have for their children?
A:I think usually parents have expectation like they\'ll be a good person or they\'ll success in life.
Most of parents want their children to be a good person or live a good life and the biggest thing is that they want their children happy.
I think it\'s because of the feeling that parents feel when their children is happy or they do well on school.
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름]!
Thank you for doing your homework. :)
I understand that English could be really difficult.
But it only takes faith and confidence in yourself to perfect it.
You are a smart person and I know that with constant practice you will do great… ^_^
Xoxo,
T. Christina ^^
Here are my corrections for you:
I think usually parents have expectation like they\'ll be a good person or they\'ll success in life.
>> I think, usually, parents have expectations like they\'ll be a good person or they\'ll have success in life.
Most of parents want their children to be a good person or live a good life and the biggest thing is that they want their children happy.
Most of parents want their children to be a good person or live a good life and the biggest thing is that they want their children happy.
>> Most parents want their children to be a good person or to live a good life, and the biggest thing is that they want their children to be happy.
I think it\'s because of the feeling that parents feel when their children is happy or they do well on school.
I think it\'s because of the feeling that parents feel when their children is happy or they do well on school.
>> I think it\'s because of the feeling when parents feel happy when their children are happy or they are doing well in school.
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