Friday homeowrk

2022-01-18 · 첨삭 강사 Christina

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Q:Would you prefer to have a flower garden or a vegetable garden? Why? A:I prefer to have a vegetable garden. I don\'t like flower and I like many kinds of vegetable, so if I have it, then I can grow them and eat them. Also, I\'ve got a sweet potato garden before and when I harvest them, I felt proud of my self.

강사 첨삭

Hello [이름]!

Thank you for doing your homework. :)

I understand that English could be really difficult.

But it only takes faith and confidence in yourself to perfect it.

You are a smart person and I know that with constant practice you will do great… ^_^

Xoxo,

T. Christina ^^

Here are my corrections for you:


I prefer to have a vegetable garden.

>> CORRECT!
I don\'t like flower and I like many kinds of vegetable, so if I have it, then I can grow them and eat them.

>> I don\'t like flowers and I like many kinds of vegetables, so if I will have a garden, I can grow them and eat them.
Also, I\'ve got a sweet potato garden before and when I harvest them, I felt proud of my self.

>> Also, I have a sweet potato garden before and when I harvested them, I felt proud of myself.

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