Friday homeowrk
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름]!
Thank you for doing your homework. :)
I understand that English could be really difficult.
But it only takes faith and confidence in yourself to perfect it.
You are a smart person and I know that with constant practice you will do great… ^_^
Xoxo,
T. Christina ^^
Here are my corrections for you:
I prefer to have a vegetable garden.
>> CORRECT!
I don\'t like flower and I like many kinds of vegetable, so if I have it, then I can grow them and eat them.
>> I don\'t like flowers and I like many kinds of vegetables, so if I will have a garden, I can grow them and eat them.
Also, I\'ve got a sweet potato garden before and when I harvest them, I felt proud of my self.
>> Also, I have a sweet potato garden before and when I harvested them, I felt proud of myself.
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