Friday homeowrk
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름]!
Thank you for doing your homework. :)
I understand that English could be really difficult.
But it only takes faith and confidence in yourself to perfect it.
You are a smart person and I know that with constant practice you will do great… ^_^
Xoxo,
T. Christina ^^
Here are my corrections for you:
The most difficult change that I have made was to not watch Youtube without my parents\' permission.
>> The most difficult change that I have made was to not watch YouTube without my parents\' permission.
Before, I watched Youtube without my parents\' permission, so sometimes I was scolded by my parents.
>> Before, I watched YouTube without my parents\' permission, so sometimes I was scolded by my parents.
OR
>> I used to watch YouTube without my parent\'s permission before, so sometimes I was scolded by my parents.
Now, I don\'t watch Youtube without my parents\' permission.
>> Now, I don\'t watch YouTube without my parents\' permission.
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