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2022-03-18 · 첨삭 강사 Christina

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Q:If you were not able to achieve your goal, how do you feel and what do you do next? A:If I was not able to achieve my goal, I would feel not that good and I\'l try it again. But, if the thing that I wasn\'t able to achieve was not that important, then sometimes I don\'t try it again. Now, even if I fail something, I don\'t feel that bad.

강사 첨삭

Hello [이름]!

Thank you for doing your homework. :)

I understand that English could be really difficult.

But it only takes faith and confidence in yourself to perfect it.

You are a smart person and I know that with constant practice you will do great… ^_^

Xoxo,

T. Christina ^^

Here are my corrections for you:


If I was not able to achieve my goal, I would feel not that good and I\'l try it again.

>> If I was not able to achieve my goal, I would feel not that good and I\'ll try it again.
But, if the thing that I wasn\'t able to achieve was not that important, then sometimes I don\'t try it again.

>> But if the thing that I wasn\'t able to achieve was not that important, then sometimes I don\'t try it again.
Now, even if I fail something, I don\'t feel that bad.

>> CORRECT!

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