Friday homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Claire\'s homework
강사 첨삭
1.In the movie, the cities are distroyed bby monster.>>In the movie, the cities are destroyed by a monster.
2.Ant is digging the ground to make a hole for there house.>>Ants are digging the ground to make a hole for their house.
3.I discover a broken flip flop and spoiled food in the trashcan. >>I discovered a broken flip flop and spoiled food in the trashcan.
4.I will do my work with my friend in the library.>>CORRECTOR>>I will do my task with my friend in the library.
5.We should not to download the file we don\'t know, because the computer virus might attack us.>>We should not download files we don\'t know, because the computer might get a virus.
6.Taxi driver is driving there taxi almost every day.>>Taxi drivers are driving their taxi almost every day. 7.We need to save the water even a drop of water.>>We need to save even just a drop of water.
8.I think my laptop is broken my works are disappear at once!>>I think my laptop is broken so, my works disappeared at once! 9.Pizza delivery deliver me some delicious pizza for my family.>>CORRECTOR>>Pizza delivery delivers me some tasty pizza for my family.
10.I want to live in a cotton candy island but it\'s just my dream.>>CORRECTOR>>I wish to live in a cotton candy island but it\'s just my dream. 11.Those clothes\'s design is awesome.>>The designs of the clothes are awesome.12. who is the designer of this clothes?>>Who is the designer of these clothes?
Very good, Claire.Happy weekend!- T. Melody ^^
2.Ant is digging the ground to make a hole for there house.>>Ants are digging the ground to make a hole for their house.
3.I discover a broken flip flop and spoiled food in the trashcan. >>I discovered a broken flip flop and spoiled food in the trashcan.
4.I will do my work with my friend in the library.>>CORRECTOR>>I will do my task with my friend in the library.
5.We should not to download the file we don\'t know, because the computer virus might attack us.>>We should not download files we don\'t know, because the computer might get a virus.
6.Taxi driver is driving there taxi almost every day.>>Taxi drivers are driving their taxi almost every day. 7.We need to save the water even a drop of water.>>We need to save even just a drop of water.
8.I think my laptop is broken my works are disappear at once!>>I think my laptop is broken so, my works disappeared at once! 9.Pizza delivery deliver me some delicious pizza for my family.>>CORRECTOR>>Pizza delivery delivers me some tasty pizza for my family.
10.I want to live in a cotton candy island but it\'s just my dream.>>CORRECTOR>>I wish to live in a cotton candy island but it\'s just my dream. 11.Those clothes\'s design is awesome.>>The designs of the clothes are awesome.12. who is the designer of this clothes?>>Who is the designer of these clothes?
Very good, Claire.Happy weekend!- T. Melody ^^
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