Friday homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Claire\'s homework
강사 첨삭
Hi Claire!
Don\'t say sorry about that. It\'s okay and I totally understand. Thank you for still sending your homework! ^^ It\'s really fun to read. I really do hope you can visit the Philippines in the future! Yes, let\'s play on the beach when that happens! ^^
~~Teacher Kate
I always turn on the fan when I\'m at home.
>>CORRECT!
I also make some cool fruit smoothie to cool down.
>>CORRECT!
Before the virus appears I went to beach or pool every year.
>>Before the virus appeared, I went to the beach or pool every year.
The Water always make us cool and refreshing.
>>The water always makes us cool and refreshed.
I love to play with water.
>>CORRECT!
Next summer I want to snorkeling under the deep ocean. I want to watch many under water creatures.
>>Next summer I want to go snorkeling under the deep ocean.
I want to watch many under water creatures.
>>CORRECT!
Last year I visit philippines for three weeks to learn english.
>>Last year I visited Philippines for three weeks to learn English.
If I have a chance to visit philippines again, I want to play at beach with you! I want to watch the philippines\'s beach.
>>If I have a chance to visit the Philippines again, I want to play at the beach with you! I want to see the Philippines\'s beach.
I heard the Philippines beach is beautiful!
>>CORRECT!
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