Friday homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Claire\'s homework
강사 첨삭
Hello Claire!
Thank you for doing your homework! ^^ Have a wonderful weekend! ^^
~~Teacher Kate
I hate everything that called insects and bugs.
>>I hate everything that are called insects and bugs.
Sorry to insects but they are nasty and gross.
>>I feel sorry for insects but they are nasty and gross.
The insect that I hate most are centipedes and red ants.
>>CORRECT!
I searched internet what we called [gine].
>>I searched on the internet about the insect we call \"gine\".
Yesterday\'s class do you remember that long insect I give you a picture?
>>do you remember that long insect I gave you a picture of in yesterday\'s class?
I searched in internet and that insect is called centipede.
>>CORRECT!
For red ants, they are looks same with normal ant.
>>For red ants, they look the same as normal ants.
But their color is red and they have a poisin that we can\'t cure like centipedes poisin.
>>But their color is red and they have a poison that is incurable like that of the centipede\'s poison.
And red ants are very strong so if we step on them, they crawl all over our legs and foot.
>>CORRECT!
We need to kill them with red ant poisin spray.
>>We need to kill them with red ant poison spray.
They are harmful insects.
>>CORRECT!
I think most good way out to not get harm from harmful insects is just avoid them.
>>I think that the best way to not get hurt by harmful insects is to just avoid them.
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