Friday homework
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Claire\'s homework
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Hi Claire!
Thank you for submitting your homework today too! ^^ See you next week. <3
~~Teacher Kate
I think we don\'t need to be vegetarian but I think we need to make number smaller that we eat meats.
>>I think we don\'t need to be vegetarian but I think we need to make the amount of meat we eat smaller.
Because if we eat meat to much, we need many cows and other animals so they ate lots of grasses on Earth.
>>Because if we eat meat to much, we would need many cows and other animals so they eat lots of grasses on Earth.
Then the grasses will disappear one by one. Also to much meats can make us sick or unhealthy.
>>CORRECT!
I think the animals that become our meal is poor.
>>I feel sorry for the animals that become our meal.
They need to run and relax in the forest in that time.
>>CORRECT!
Many people on the Earth try to protect animals and trees like nature.
>>CORRECT!
I\'m agree to protect nature.
>>I agree with protecting nature.
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