Friday homework
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Claire\'s homework
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Hello Claire!
Thank you for sharing your best food experience. I could imagine that experience! ^^ See you tomorrow. <3
~~teacher Kate
It was a Christmas eve’s early night time.
>>It was one early Christmas eve.
And the weather is snowy and cold.
>>And the weather was snowy and cold.
My dad is coming from the work.
>>My dad was still not home from work.
So my mom and I had a night food.
>>So my mom and I had a night snack.
The food is really nice but I don’t know the name exactly.
>>CORRECT!
And this is my best food experience.
>>CORRECT!
Because it was super cozy cause if I look at the window it is snowy also I wear blanket from my mom.
>>It was because it was super cozy cause when I looked out the window, it was snowy and I had a blanket on me from my mom.
I think this is my best food experience for now.
>>CORRECT!
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